3.某些表达不准确，似有Chinglish之嫌。如：(12)They believe it does no good to exams.该句老外可能也看得懂，但是绝对不是英语中表达的方式。还是应改成：“They believe reading literature won’t help their children at all with their exams.”为妥当。再有“(10)Thirdly, it’s the high price that discourage someone from reading literary books.”句型倒是个好句型，所用词汇也比较好，但是所表达的意思根本就不符合逻辑。似乎应改成：Thirdly, it’s the high price that makes them unable to afford to buy literary books.

　　4.词汇的搭配上有错误。如：(14)…, as reading literary books can be beneficial for study. 应改成：…, as reading literary books can be beneficial to studying our subjects.

　　【修改后的习作】

　　Recently our student union has had a survey on reading after class. As is shown in Chart 1,half of the students are fond of reading newspapers or various magazines. 20% students usually read cartoons. The percentage of those who choose to read literary books is the smallest, only 10%. The rest students like reading others.

　　Why are so many students unwilling to read literary works? According to Chart 2, firstly,50% enrich our

　　school life but also broaden our horizon. Schools are supposed to take effective measures to encourage students to read more, as reading literary books can be beneficial to studying our subjects.

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