习14句15①习作简单句。本文使用了个简单句，使文章增加了可读性；

　　②习作注意了过渡词、过渡句的使用。如： To begin with, … ⑾What’s more,…⒀Last but not least, …等。这样的运用使得文章表达连贯；

　　③习作注意了高级词汇的运用的使用使文章增色不少。：overcame，be firmly convincedt no time should we give up，without delaying ，Last but not least，form the habit of等等。

　　④习作注意运用了变通表达法。遇到挫折facing the setback”和“when we are in trouble”。

　　⑤习作注意了动词时态的正确运用。如：第一段介绍陈若琳Fighting spirit instructed her succeed and she achieved two gold medals eventually.要改成“Fighting spirit led her to succeed and she won two gold medals eventually.” ⑹First, it inspires us facing the setback and difficulties bravely. 要改成“First, it inspires us to face the setback and difficulties bravely.” ⑽To begin with, we should be firmly convinced that everyone is possible to succeed. 要改成“To begin with, we should be firmly convinced that everyone is likely to succeed.”

　　②要避免汉语式的表达。如：She was born in 1992.12.12要改成“She was born on December 12, 1992”。

　　③某些表达不到位。如：在表达“陈若琳，1992年12月12日生于江苏南通She was born in Nantong, Jiangsu Province, on December 12, 1992”。“… she achieved two gold medals eventually.”要表达成“…she won two gold medals at the 2017 London Olympic Games eventually.”

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