下半场,运动。员们你争我夺,个个汗流浃背,脸涨得通红,有的累得跑不动了,但还是坚持下来。最后,我班运动员终于以26:19的成绩,赢得了这场比赛的胜利。
Second half, sport. The members competed with each other. They were all sweaty and red. Some of them were too tired to run, but they persisted. In the end, the athletes of our class finally won the competition with a score of 26:19.
同学们笑啊跳啊,纷纷的议论着胜利的来之不易……
The students laughed and danced and talked about the hard won victory
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写篮球赛,以双方主力队员为重点,抓住比赛的精彩情节,抓住接球、传球、拼抢及投篮的一系列动作,详细描写,突出了比赛的紧张、激烈。场上运动员“生龙活虎”的精神状态,、场外的观众眼睛“瞪得老大。”盯着篮球转及呐喊助威等,也作了简洁而生动的描写,有力地烘托了气氛。
Write basketball game, focus on the main players of both sides, grasp the wonderful plot of the game, catch the ball, pass, fight and shoot a series of actions, detailed description, highlighting the tension and intensity of the game. The mental state of the athletes on the field, and the audience's eyes on the field "stare at the boss." Staring at the basketball and cheering, he also made a brief and vivid description, which effectively set off the atmosphere.
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