什么是平衡,我大了才知道,可猫被剪掉胡须的景象到现在还记忆犹新。哦!童年如画,童年如歌,……难忘的童年趣事,使人永远沉浸在愉快之中。
What is balance? I didn't know until I was older, but I still remember the scene of the cat being cut off. Oh Childhood is like a picture, childhood is like a song Unforgettable childhood fun, so that people will always be immersed in happiness.
教师评析:是的“童年如画,童年如歌”。该习作选材新颖,语言流畅,写出了童心童趣。且还可以看出小作者语言功底较深。
Teacher's comments: Yes, "childhood is like a picture, childhood is like a song". The material selection of the exercise is novel, the language is fluent, and the childlike innocence is written. It can also be seen that the language skills of the author are deep.
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