着手上的唐诗宋词,我突发奇想,我已经不小了,我能不能作一首诗呢?我冥想了一会儿,就象瞎子摸象一样,不懂。所以我跑向能诗善画的叔叔那去。
The Tang poetry and Song poetry on hand, I have a whim, I am not small, can I make a poem? I meditated for a while, like a blind man touching an elephant. I didn't understand. So I ran to my uncle who was good at poetry and painting.
“叔叔,写诗的要点是什么?”我急着问。
"Uncle, what's the point of writing poetry?" I asked in a hurry.
1、诗句简短而意义丰富,
1. Poems are short and meaningful,
2、诗要分行,
2. Poetry should be divided into branches,
3、诗的韵律感、节奏感较强。
3. Poetry has a strong sense of rhythm.
4、出美丽的想象(从平凡中看出不平凡)。
4. Make a beautiful imagination (see the extraordinary from the ordinary).
5、出动人的情意(加入感情)。
5. Stir up one's feelings.
这就是写诗的要点。必须好好斟酌。”叔叔平静地说。
This is the point of writing poetry. It has to be considered. " Said uncle calmly.
“诗句简短意义丰富……”我一直在重复着叔叔所说的几句话,想了许久,悟出了一些明理,我便开始动笔。我准备写美丽的景色,取个题目《江南阅景》,第一句,我写道“空中飞花几多愁”,愁字体现了我当时的心情,不错!第二句写柳树“江边柳数几多柔”,对,柔字体现柳条飘动的情景,第三句写大雁“碧天大雁掠成行”,最后一句写总结“此景清美化心愁”。嗯,写得很美,总体就是“空中飞花几多愁,江边柳数几多柔。碧天大雁掠成行,此景清美化心愁。”读读,咦?诗中有两个“几多”,重复,我改什么好呢?“空中飞花飘散愁。”?不行不行,这样意思都变了,那“空中飞花飘扬愁。”吧!可以,就用这个了!
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