With the passage of time, this has been a note in my heart that I have been savoring. Whenever I think about it, I always laugh. This is also my heart full of joy "diary".
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Comment:
1.小作者向我们讲述了他童年时曾做过的一件荒唐事—在好奇心的驱使下,用“剃须刀”为小狗理了新发型,本是好意,怎知是违背规律办了错事。故事情节具体生动,结构完整。
1. The little author tells us about a ridiculous thing he did in his childhood. Driven by curiosity, he used a "razor" to get a new hair style for the dog. It was a good idea, but how could he know that he did something wrong against the law. The plot is concrete and vivid with complete structure.
2.文章对人物神态及动作描写生动形象,对话符合人物身份。“我”0的心理活动也刻画的真实准确,将一个天真可爱的孩子形象生动地展现在我们面前。
2. The article describes the characters' expression and action vividly, and the dialogue conforms to the characters' identity. The psychological activities of "I" 0 are also true and accurate, which vividly displays a naive and lovely child in front of us.
3.语言自然流畅,条理清晰,充满生活气息。
3. The language is natural and fluent, clear and full of life atmosphere.
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