点评:
Comment:
1.人物形象鲜明,将一个执拗、倔强的孩子和一位宽厚、无私的母亲刻画得淋漓尽致。人物语言极具代表性真实可信,生动准确地反映出人物当时的情绪和心理,对表现人物性格起到重要作用。
1. The characters are vivid, depicting a stubborn and stubborn child and a generous and selfless mother vividly. The language of the characters is very representative, authentic, vivid and accurate to reflect the emotions and psychology of the characters at that time, which plays an important role in the performance of the characters' character.
2.文中前半部分为下文的态度转变起到铺垫作用,情感发展自然真实,合情合理,中心突出。
2. The first half of the paper is the foreshadowing of the following attitude change. The development of emotion is natural and true, reasonable and centered.
语言质朴自然,条理清晰,文笔流畅。
The language is simple and natural, clear and fluent.
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