“你们快走吧!人类破坏环境的速度不断加快,你们再不逃,到那时候会没命的。”
"Let's go! Human beings are destroying the environment faster and faster. If you don't run away, you will be killed at that time. "
动植物们收拾东西,正准备走,突然又停下来了。它们在思索:“家该往哪儿搬呢?”
The animals and plants were packing up. They were about to leave when they suddenly stopped. They were thinking, "where should I move my home?"
点评:文章选材新颖、独特,以《松树的遗书》为题,富有启发性和震撼力。读后,不得不引发读者深深的思索。“植物朋友们”、“鸟类朋友们”、“鱼弟弟你要尽快告诉你的同伴”等,这些语句无不显露出小作者的一颗善良的童心。写作文应该写自己的童心、平常心,这样才能有真情实感。
Comments: the article is novel and unique in material selection. It is full of inspiration and shock with the title of pine tree's bequest. After reading it, the readers have to think deeply. "Friends of plants", "Friends of birds", "brother fish, you should tell your companion as soon as possible" and so on, all of these sentences reveal the good childlike innocence of the author. To write a composition, one should write one's childlike and ordinary mind, so that one can have true feelings.
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