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1.文章主旨明确,内容完整,描述了小主人公偷偷帮父亲抄签条被误解,最终父亲明白了事实真相的整个事件的核心内容。
1. The main idea of the article is clear and the content is complete. It describes that the little hero secretly helped his father copy the signature slip, which was misunderstood. Finally, the father understood the core content of the whole event.
2.语言简洁明了,逻辑性强,如保留对家庭成员的介绍、父亲对叙利奥原本耳朵爱及生活的清苦,就为身为长子的叙利奥为何引发“抄签条事件”,承受着的巨大心理压力埋好了伏笔。将父亲的多次误解及种种表现用“一而再再二三”来体现,可谓精妙准确。文章结尾更是简明扼要。
2. The language is concise and logical. For example, keeping the introduction of family members, the father's original love for sulio's ears and the hardships of life, it foreshadows why sulio, as the eldest son, caused the "scribing event" and the huge psychological pressure he was under. It can be said that it is exquisite and accurate to use "one after another, two or three" to reflect the father's many misunderstandings and various performances. The end of the article is more concise.
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