One possible version:

I’m a student from a village. When I was young I could not see the world. My parents were poor and did not have enough money to send me to hospital. So I could not go to school I was very shy. One day the ORBIS doctors came they performed an operation on me at once. The operation was successful. I am able to see everything clearly and can go to school now. I like chatting with friends.I am very grateful to them. I think ORBIS is a wonderful organization. We should support their work by sending donations to ORBIS.

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Scoring criteria:

第五档：(9—10分)能写明全部要点，语言基本无误或有少量拼写错误，行文流畅，表达清楚。

Fifth file: (9-10 points) be able to write all the key points, the language is basically correct or there are a few spelling errors, the writing is fluent and the expression is clear.

第四档：(7—8分)能写明大部分要点，语言有一些错误(句子结构或动词时态错误1—2处)，但行文基本流畅，表达基本清楚。

The fourth level: (7-8 points) can write most of the main points, there are some errors in the language (sentence structure or verb tense errors 1-2), but the writing is basically fluent and the expression is basically clear.

第三档：(5—6分)能写明一些要点，语言错误较多(句子结构或动词时态错误3—4处)，但意思基本连贯，表达基本清楚。

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