Heart, after all, is self, why don't you listen to your own world? At this moment, I think of something, yes, is the youth. The happiness in my life is as sweet as sugar, because I can walk in the warm afternoon with my best friend hand in hand. As soon as the sugar melts, I feel sad. My best friend is going to leave me. How can I not be sad. But, it doesn't matter, although the time is short, but the most beautiful time we swim hand in hand! So, let me put out the most beautiful smile, let my best friend see the deepest blessing in my heart, let me taste the sadness of the separation in my heart.
有心人就是这样么?或许吧,可对我而言,用心翻阅诗词,用心聆听音乐,用心感悟自己就算是做到了吧,无风仍脉脉,不雨亦潇潇。用心,就能听到世界深沉的故事,那么,我会做个有心人,谛昕世界,谛听美好。
Is that what you want? Maybe, but for me, I read poems with my heart, listen to music with my heart, and realize that I can do it even if I have no wind or pulse, no rain or Xiaoxiao. With my heart, I can hear the deep story of the world. Then, I will be a thoughtful person, listen to the world and listen to the beauty.
你何不也做个有心人呢?
Why don't you be a man of your heart?
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三个片段诗歌、音乐、离别,都涂上了一层浓浓的文学色彩,而这三方面又紧紧围绕“有心人”来展开,内容丰富且具典型性,选材与表达都体现出考生深厚的次学功底。同时,结构相同、语言简洁的三个小标题,不仅体现出巧妙的构思,而且使文章层次。
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