In the blue pupa, there is no light or hope in the dark. I struggled so hard that I felt lonely. My heart is ready to move, I am eager to break the cocoon of new life, eager to go to the outside world to see the new sun again. But I was afraid to cower in the corner. I am so contradictory, I long for new life, but I am afraid of the sting of sunshine after cocoon breaking. Youth is such a mystery that it leads people to maturity. Strong desire for new life makes me break out of the cocoon and go to the light
金色的蝴蝶
The Golden Butterfly
破茧新生的蝴蝶,翩翩起舞。我不再孤独,我的生命中再次点燃了爱和希望的灯盏,我勇敢地奔向蓝天,在花丛中飞越,享受着阳光的和煦。化作金色蝴蝶的我飞向青春的绚烂……
The new butterflies are dancing. I am no longer lonely, my life once again lit the lamp of love and hope, I bravely ran to the blue sky, flying in the flowers, enjoying the warmth of the sun. I turn into a golden butterfly and fly to the splendor of youth
左手青春,右手年华!青春是破茧而出的新生。冲破青春束缚的我,也如此美丽迷人!
Left hand youth, right hand youth! Youth is a new generation coming out of the cocoon. I break through the shackles of youth, so beautiful and charming!
点评:在每年的中考作文阅卷过程中,有一类作文让人眼前一亮。其基本结构为:文前有“题记”,有的文后还有“后记”;文中用几个并列关系或递进关系的小标题来构架全文。如上文,开头有简洁的题记;主体部分用了三个小标题:“蓝色的蛹”、“破茧的挣扎”、“金色的蝴蝶”。小标题对各个段落的内容起了画龙点睛的作用,而小标题之间的递进关系,显示了“战胜自己”的心路历程。连续评卷的疲劳之际,忽见此类文章,自然会产生一种特别的审美愉悦。
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