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战胜自己

It may be because of the specific tension in the examination room, this paper also has obvious defects. The pain of "autistic" is fully expressed, but the process of "conquering" is too simple. Only "youth, which is so mysterious, leads people to maturity. The strong desire for new life made me break out of the cocoon and go to the light. To defeat oneself, we should focus on the process of victory. If we only take it with one word, this "victory" will be hard to be persuasive and will not inspire readers. On the other hand, the language of the article also has something to be considered. For example, in the metaphor of "blue chrysalis, binding youth", "chrysalis" should be the mistake of "cocoon" (later, "weaving blue chrysalis for oneself" is also the same), and "blue" should be "white"; in "windless heart bank", "heart bank" should be "heart lake"; "only one's own narcissism" should be replaced by "only one's narcissism".

瑕不掩瑜，且高考及中考作文评卷中，新颖的构思、优美的语言等，是可以加分的。本文也应在加分之列。

In addition, new ideas and beautiful language can be added to the college entrance examination and the high school entrance examination. This article should also be included in the list of bonus points.