快乐到处都有,关键在于能不能去发现。富人的快乐在于生意谈妥,股票上升,地皮升值。穷人的快乐在于家人平安,孩子健康.生活美满。老人的快乐在于下棋有招,看戏有乐,子女孝顺。孩子的快乐在于老师表扬,漫画有趣,去肯德基大快朵颐。
Happiness is everywhere. The key is to find out. The happiness of the rich lies in the negotiation of business, the rise of stocks and the appreciation of land. The happiness of the poor lies in the safety of their families, the health of their children and the happiness of their lives. The happiness of the old man lies in his moves in playing chess, his joy in watching plays and his filial piety. Children's happiness lies in Teachers' praise, funny comics, and eating at KFC.
噢,告诉你一个秘密,记住这个品牌——“百事可乐”,你就会做一个快乐的发现者。
Oh, tell you a secret, remember this brand - "Pepsi Cola", you will be a happy discoverer.
一个关心你的同学
A classmate who cares about you
【阅卷简批】
[review and approval]
“做个快乐的发现者”,笔者认为,“甜甜”的这种状态是因为没有找到属于自己的快乐、缺乏发现而导致的。于是作者以引导的方式来面对“甜甜”这一问题。故事是大家都喜欢听的,尤其韵味深刻的故事能给人带来启发,使人感于故事,感于现实。作者正是在这样地引导,而且故事勾勒的神情饱满,怎能不折服于人呢。而主体部分的举例论证更是句句铿锵有力,容不得质疑,容不得否定,这种先发制人的笔功值得考生欣赏、借鉴。
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