我想要去流浪,没有太多的理由,只是一种心情。
I want to go wandering, there are not many reasons, just a mood.
甜甜同学,你能和我一道去吗?盼望你的回音。
Sweetie, can you come with me? I look forward to your reply.
一个关心你的同学
A classmate who cares about you
【阅卷简批】
[review and approval]
90后生在众人的“谐音”中就是“非主流”,叛逆的一代。就如作者自己所言的那样特立独行——“没有方向,没有目标,有的只是一种浪子情怀,一种别样的个性,一种淡淡的叛逆。”作者的这篇文章是对90后的一种代表性的全面剖析,道出了心中的无奈与深怨。这是一篇具有挑战性的文章,直面现实,贞言不讳。而作者这般尖锐、独立的讲叙从心理上来说就已经构成了反思(即劝说)的立场。解铃还需系铃人,个人心理上的烦恼其实也只有自己主动努力才能排除的,作者的长篇大论实则就是对于无奈的发泄,这就是心理疗法的体现。所以说作者的立场同样站在劝说的角度,符合命题的写作宗旨。
Born in the "homophony" of the public, the post-90s generation is a "non mainstream" and rebellious generation. As the author himself said, "there is no direction, no goal, only a kind of prodigal feelings, a different personality, a kind of light rebellion." The author's article is a representative analysis of the post-90s, which reveals the helplessness and deep resentment in his heart. This is a challenging article, face the reality, and be honest. The author's sharp and independent narration has formed the position of introspection (persuasion) psychologically. To solve the problem, we need to tie the bell. In fact, the psychological troubles can only be eliminated by our own efforts. In fact, the author's long speech is to vent the helpless, which is the embodiment of psychotherapy. Therefore, the author's position is also in the perspective of persuasion, which conforms to the writing purpose of the proposition.
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