今年温州中考作文题为《从那一刻开始》,总分60分。一名阅卷老师记录了这样一段考生作文:“六年级时,我有了一个女朋友,她漂亮,活泼,可爱啊!可是好日子才刚过上,她就转学了。当时的我崩溃了。过了两个星期,我找到了第二个女朋友,比上次那个要好。从那一刻开始,我有了甜蜜的伴侣。”
This year, the composition of Wenzhou high school entrance examination is entitled "from that moment on", with a total score of 60 points. A marking teacher recorded the composition of the examinee: "in the sixth grade, I had a girlfriend. She was beautiful, lively and lovely!"! But just after the good days, she transferred to another school. I collapsed at the time. After two weeks, I found a second girlfriend, better than the last one. From that moment on, I had a sweet companion. "
“我找到了第二个女朋友,比上次那个要好。从那一刻开始,我有了甜蜜伴侣。”这是我市一名考生中考作文中的“雷人”句子。昨天,一位参与今年我市中考语文作文阅卷的老师透露,个别学生的中考作文涉及换女友、偷东西等内容,在情感倾向和道德观上出现偏差,造成严重失分。
"I found a second girlfriend, better than the one last time. From that moment on, I had a sweet companion. " This is the sentence "Lei Ren" in the composition of a examinee in our city. Yesterday, a teacher who participated in this year's senior high school entrance examination Chinese composition marking revealed that the composition of individual students involved in changing girlfriends, stealing and other contents, which deviated in emotional tendency and moral outlook, resulting in serious score loss.
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