信念的力量足以撼动天地!
The power of faith is enough to shake the world!
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如何诠释“信念的力量”?这位考生将自己平时积累的材料经过一番遴选,用外国足球运动员、中国古代文学家和抗震救灾中的英雄教师的事例,层层深入去表现主旨,让评卷教师为考生的知识面广、组材精巧大为赞许。这是一篇相当成功的考场作文。
How to interpret the power of faith? This examinee selects the materials he has accumulated at ordinary times, and uses the examples of foreign football players, ancient Chinese writers and heroic teachers in earthquake relief to show the main idea at various levels, so that the teacher can praise the examinee for his wide knowledge and exquisite materials. This is a quite successful composition for the examination.
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