沂市2009年中考满分作文附点评_初中英语作文

沂市2009年中考满分作文附点评

After waiting for thousands of years, I finally took the shenzhou-10 manned spacecraft to the space and flew to God's "easy Palace". God's home is not the general beauty, hard to describe with ink! Although I was envious and envious, I didn't care to go straight to the "blissful Palace". Eh, who's that old man sitting in the garden keeping his eyes shut? , God! Then, I dressed up, went forward, coughed, and said, "Lord God, you are free and easy! Why don't we go to the people to observe the sufferings? I, Dongshi, because of your negligence, have grown into this kind of look, the white eyes and ridicule of the people who have suffered, you must make up your mind for me! " Said, can not help but from the middle, tears wet my lapel. God opened his eyes, smiled at me, listened to me. After my accusation was quickly released, he slowly opened his mouth and said, "my poor child, you have been living in the eyes of all people for so many years. You have lost yourself, and at the same time you have woven a cage of self-restraint. You have never found your own advantages and highlights from yourself!" Then God said slowly, "all things are born in the world and have their own value. You see, in this garden, the grass is not as beautiful as flowers, but if there is no grass, the beauty of flowers will not be highlighted. As for you, don't imitate others, don't envy others, go out of this small world of yourself, find your strengths and advantages, help others and serve the world, and you will get the love and respect that people should have! " After that, God waved his sleeves and went away again.