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作者紧紧把握住了题目的内涵，高明之处在于做了恰当的延伸，展开了丰富的想象，通过一个独特"人生旅途"的浓缩阐明了一个深刻的哲理。文章构思巧妙，"小引"和"后记"既在文章之外，又在文章之内；既是对文章内容的概括，又是对文章主题的升华，是动了一番心思的；"生命的色彩"像一条红线把不同的时空紧紧相连，使各段落既有跳跃，又自然贯通。语言清新委婉，朴素中透着华美，表现力很强，可见作者语言功底也是很深厚的。

The author holds the connotation of the topic tightly, and the brilliant point lies in the proper extension and rich imagination. Through a unique & quot; life journey & quot; concentration, the author expounds a profound philosophy. The idea of the article is ingenious. The quotation and postscript are not only outside but also inside the article. They are not only the summary of the content of the article, but also the sublimation of the theme of the article. They are the colors of life that have moved people's mind. Like a red line, they closely connect different time and space, making each paragraph jump and connect naturally. The language is fresh and euphemistic, plain and full of beauty and strong expressiveness, which shows that the author's language skills are also profound.

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