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直到一天，我把关于台湾的最新消息告诉她：“台湾问题已经和平解决了，她已经回到了祖国的怀抱，而且，我们也已经与姥爷取得了联系……”虽然这是假的，但她相信了，她在欣慰中闭上了眼睛，看她安详地离去，我们感慨万端。

Until one day, I told her the latest news about Taiwan: "the Taiwan issue has been solved peacefully, she has returned to the embrace of the motherland, and we have also made contact with Grandpa..." Although it's fake, she believed it. She closed her eyes in relief and watched her leave peacefully. We were filled with emotion.

台湾，姥爷，快回来吧，实现我的谎言，也实现姥姥的心愿。

Taiwan, Grandpa, come back quickly, realize my lies and realize grandma's wishes.

【满分理由】这是一篇典型的“主题先行”的文章，是考场上的流行色。但作者善于以小见大，把难度较大的时势题材把握得很好。结构、情节，甚至还有细节，都给人以真实的感觉。短短的900度揭示了国家不能统一给普通家庭带来的苦难，深刻地反映了海峡两岸人民“踮起脚尖”盼家人团聚、祖国统一这一时代主题。文章结构完整，文笔流畅、自然。此外，白描手法也为文章增色不少。(高星云点评)

[Full Score reason] this is a typical "theme first" article, which is a popular color in the examination room. But the author is good at seeing the big from the small, and grasps the difficult current situation theme very well. The structure, the plot and even the details all give people a real feeling. The short 900 degrees reveals the suffering of ordinary families caused by the failure of national reunification, and profoundly reflects the theme of the times when people on both sides of the Taiwan Strait "stand on tiptoe" to hope for family reunification and reunification of the motherland. The structure of the article is complete, and the writing is smooth and natural. In addition, the technique of white drawing also adds a lot of color to the article. (comments on Gaoyun)