这一年，我三十四岁，母亲五十七岁。她在我所在的学校食堂做临时工，一份几百块钱的工作，她却比谁都看重，都珍惜。空余时间，还在食堂后面的空地上，种了菜，时不时地来帮我做做家务……

This year, I was thirty-four and my mother was fifty-seven. She works as a temporary worker in the canteen of my school, a job of several hundred yuan, but she values and cherishes it more than anyone else. In my spare time, I planted vegetables in the open space behind the canteen and came to help me do housework from time to time

母亲拿着脏衣服的身影已经走远，灶台上，放着她刚刚从地里摘下的青菜，翠绿翠绿的，还闪着光。往事一幕一幕，那踮起脚尖的身影在我的泪眼前交错浮现，告诉我许多，也教会我许多，还提醒我许多……

The figure of mother with dirty clothes has gone far. On the hearth, there are vegetables she just picked from the ground. They are green and shining. In the past, the figure on tiptoe appeared before my tears, telling me a lot, teaching me a lot and reminding me a lot

【满分理由】文贵出新。读罢这篇满分作文，我们只觉得一股清新之气扑面而来，而这“新”体现为以下三个方面：

[Full Score reason] your article is new. After reading this full score composition, we only feel a fresh breath coming, and this "new" is reflected in the following three aspects:

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