三是组织能力新巧。全文谋篇布局，独出心裁。不说序词的运用，单说横断面的截取，就匠心独具。作者截取“五岁”“十五岁”“三十五岁”“四十岁”等四个人生阶段，表现从小到大，从读书到成家，“母亲踮起脚尖为我撑一方爱的晴空”的主旨。能达到如此新巧的构思，实为难得。文中有《乡愁》的影子。(高星云点评)

Third, new organizational skills. Full text layout, ingenuity. Not to mention the use of preface words, but to say the interception of cross-section, it is unique. The author intercepts the four life stages of "five years old", "fifteen years old", "thirty-five years old" and "forty years old", and expresses the main idea of "mother stands on tiptoe to support the clear sky of love for me" from small to large, from reading to family. It's hard to get such a new idea. There is the shadow of nostalgia in the article. (comments on Gaoyun)

【档次及得分】(一类作文卷上)计分：内容25+表达25+发展等级10=60

[grade and score] (on class I composition paper) score: content 25 + expression 25 + development level 10 = 60

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