"Keep the golden mountain and use it"
优分作文以“生活味”取胜
Excellent composition wins with "life flavor"
今年高考作文优分卷一共8篇,比去年少了4篇,是评分标准高了还是有意减少优卷比例,目前参与高考作文评卷的老师没有透露。优秀作文的共同点,是切中“也”这个题眼,此外,从生活中来是今年优秀卷的明显特征。
There are 8 excellent papers in this year's college entrance examination, 4 less than last year. Whether the scoring standard is higher or whether the proportion of excellent papers is intentionally reduced? At present, the teachers participating in the college entrance examination composition evaluation have not disclosed. The common point of excellent composition is to focus on the topic of "also". In addition, it is the obvious feature of this year's excellent volume from life.
今年的优秀作文,市教科院中学教研室语文科主任俞发亮认为,体现了返璞归真的特点,有些文章借鉴了名家名篇的经典模式。《这也是一种爱》中“望着父亲起身离去的背影,儿子有些茫然”一段,有朱自清《背影》的影子。《这也是一种芬芳》中“爷爷又在熬药了,我不再逃避”,从讨厌到喜欢,有杨朔《荔枝蜜》的味道。
This year's excellent composition, Yu Fuliang, director of the Chinese Department of the middle school teaching and Research Office of the Municipal Academy of Educational Sciences, believes that it embodies the characteristics of returning to the basics and returning to the true. Some articles draw on the classic model of famous writers and articles. "This is also a kind of love" in "looking at the back of the father to leave, the son is a little confused" section, there is the shadow of Zhu Ziqing's "back". "This is also a kind of fragrance" in "Grandpa is cooking medicine again, I will not escape", from hate to like, has the taste of Yangshuo "litchi honey".
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