Let's all try to be reflected and warmed by the light of & quot; dust & quot;, and at the same time to bear & quot; dust & quot; Zerun, we also join the ranks of giving out light and heat, so that every Chinese with yellow skin and black eyes can create pride in their pride - the mountain can become its height without rejecting the dust, and the sea can only become its depth by cherishing the water.
阅卷小记
Marking
1.借洗练的语言彰显才情、书写心灵。文章开局乃至多处运用或排比、或比喻、或对比、或对偶等修辞方法,倍显作者驾驭语言功力。
1. Show your talent and write your mind with the words. At the beginning of the article, or even many rhetorical methods such as parallelism, metaphor, contrast, or antithesis are used to show the author's mastery of language.
2.凭广泛的选材丰富内容、突现主旨。文章思路开阔、笔涉广博,不仅大大丰富了内容,使文章显得分外厚重充实,而且更好地突现了赞颂"微尘",为"助人为乐"而"鼓与呼"的主题。
2. Enrich the content and highlight the main idea with a wide range of materials. The article is broad-minded and broad-based, which not only greatly enriches the content, makes the article appear extra thick and substantial, but also better highlights the theme of praising & quot; micro dust & quot; for & quot; helping others & quot; and & quot; drum and call & quot.
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