记得华农大学生小李的话:“记住别人对自己的帮助,学会帮助别人。”
Remember the words of Xiao Li, a student of Huanong University: "remember others' help to yourself, and learn to help others."
记得冰心老人的话:“爱在左,同情在右,随时播种,随时收获。”
Remember the words of old man Bingxin: "love is on the left, compassion is on the right, sowing and harvesting at any time."
记得我的话:“爱出于本心。”
Remember my words: "love comes from the heart."
爱出者爱返,福往者福来。
No pay no gain.
【点评】本文从冰心的名言入手,以冰心的名言为题,聚焦两则材料中主人公语句中的人性的光辉,进而在孟子名句的导引下使慈悲、帮助、传递逐层深入,又以小李、冰心以及自己的话收束全文,可谓引证见精巧。在丛飞和女孩的材料基础上,从三毛到史铁生,从林秀贞到“微尘”,从德国到河南,从天津到山东,事例的角度丰富,选例的空间广阔,叙例的语言精当。这些例证如粒粒珍珠闪耀着理性的光芒,可谓例证典型见精神,材料丰富发光华。
[comments] starting from Bingxin's famous words, this paper focuses on the brilliance of human nature in the main characters' sentences in the two materials, and then under the guidance of Mencius's famous sentences, makes compassion, help and transmission go deep layer by layer, and ends the whole article with Xiaoli, Bingxin and their own words, which can be described as a delicate quotation. On the basis of congfei's and girl's materials, from Sanmao to Shi Tiesheng, from Lin Xiuzhen to "Weichen", from Germany to Henan, from Tianjin to Shandong, the perspective of examples is rich, the space for selecting examples is vast, and the language for describing examples is precise. These examples, such as pearls shining with the light of reason, can be described as typical examples of spirit, rich and brilliant materials.
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