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这是一篇用眼泪用真情挥洒的考场佳作。读了本文之后,真的被作者那声声泪、字字血的语言文字所感染。这种强烈的情感是通过什么手法渲染出来的呢?我认为通篇运用的呼告修辞手法起了非常重要的作用。如“妈妈,您还好吗?”“妈妈,回来好不好?”“妈妈,您看见了吗?”等语句增强了整个呼唤的抒情表达效果,有力地表达了自己的悲痛情感。可以说,这种呼唤的情感贯穿全文,使文章回环往复,荡气回肠,使阅卷者也受到了强烈的感染。
This is a masterpiece of the examination hall with tears and true feelings. After reading this article, I was really infected by the author's words with tears and blood. By what means is this strong emotion rendered? I think the call rhetoric used throughout the article plays a very important role. Like "Mom, are you ok?" "Mom, will you come back?" "Mom, did you see it?" And so on sentence enhanced the whole Call Lyric expression effect, effectively expressed their own grief emotion. It can be said that this kind of calling emotion runs through the whole paper, makes the article go back and forth, makes the readers also be strongly infected.
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