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袋鼠族忧思录

"袋鼠"们也该自觉告别袋子，在自然的风雨中做回真正的自己，在自由的天地里收获心灵的丰盈。

&Kangaroo & quot; we should also consciously bid farewell to the bag, be ourselves in the natural wind and rain, and reap the richness of our hearts in the free world.

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考场作文宜小中见大，不宜从大处着笔。因为受中学生思想认识和作文篇幅的限制，

It is better to see the big in the small than to write in the big. Because of the limitations of middle school students' ideological understanding and composition length,

大处落笔往往容易导致内容空洞。而这篇文章直写当代教育与国家前途的关系，落笔相当大，

Writing in a large place tends to lead to empty content. This article directly describes the relationship between contemporary education and the future of the country, which is quite large,

但是因为形象地引入了"袋鼠族"这一概念，文章并不因"大"而显得"空"。看来，恰当地运用比喻手法的确是使文章生动形象的一个好办法。

However, due to the introduction of the concept of kangaroo, the article does not appear empty because of the large size of kangaroo;. It seems that proper use of metaphor is indeed a good way to make the article vivid and vivid.