中国富裕起来了，中国这个“富人家”的孩子该怎样教育？

China has become rich. How to educate the children of the "rich family"?

不禁要问：谁出事了？孩子？教育？

Can't help but ask: who happened? Children? Education?

【亮点透析】

[highlights dialysis]

基础等级切合题意

Basic level is suitable for the topic

文章对漫画的主题把握十分准确，通过细致观察，提炼出主题——家庭、学校、社会常常给予现在的独生子女们过多、过分的关心和夸大、不切实际的、不必要的教育与指责。

This paper holds the theme of comics very accurately. Through careful observation, the theme - family, school and society often give too much, too much concern and exaggeration, unrealistic and unnecessary education and criticism to the only child now.

内容充实文章围绕主题选择素材，中国、美国、日本以及洪战辉等事例的运用充实了内容。

Content enrichment the article selects materials around the theme, and the use of examples such as China, the United States, Japan and Hong Zhanhui enriches the content.

发展等级深刻

Profound development level

透过现象深入本质

Go deep into the essence through the phenomenon

漫画作文难在透过画面看到其中的生活道理或哲理，本文做得很好。并且能结合学校、家庭、社会三方面辩证地看问题，很深刻。

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