一、立意不俗。作者能够由一则故事来谈“信念是人生的肩膀”,很不一般。
1、 A good idea. The author can talk about "faith is the shoulder of life" from a story, which is very unusual.
二、结构完整。故事是铺垫,升华是议论部分,这个结构让读者一目了然。
2、 The structure is complete. The story is the foreshadowing, the sublimation is the discussion part, this structure lets the reader be clear at a glance.
三、材料新鲜。作者把一个小故事,演绎成与肩膀有关的话题,使得陈旧的材料变得新鲜。
3、 The material is fresh. The author turns a little story into a topic related to shoulders, which makes the old materials fresh.
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