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肩膀

It takes courage and strength to shoulder all the worries of the past and the present, but this is a task that every passionate Chinese people should shoulder. No one can shrink back, no one can shrink back!

一肩担尽古今愁需要坚实的肩膀啊！

A solid shoulder is needed to bear all the worries of the past and the present!

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文章值得说道的有以下几点：

The following points are worth mentioning:

一、立意不俗，选材精当。文章以“一肩担尽古今愁”为题，以历史人物为思维定点，然后一步步搜寻，到底什么是“古今愁”，到底什么样的人能担起“古今愁”，顺着这个思路，作者引出了屈原、鲁迅，并以此佐证只有这样的人，担的才是古今愁，只有这样的人，才能担起古今愁！这“古今愁”就是对国家、社会的一种责任，能担起这样“古今愁”的人应该有坚实的肩膀。

1、 The idea is not vulgar, and the material selection is precise. This article takes "one shoulder bears all the worries of ancient and modern times" as the title, takes historical figures as the thinking point, and then searches step by step, what is "ancient and modern worries" and what kind of people can bear "ancient and modern worries". Following this thinking, the author leads out Qu Yuan and Lu Xun, and proves that only such people can bear ancient and modern worries, and only such people can bear ancient and modern worries! This "ancient and modern sorrow" is a kind of responsibility to the country and society. People who can bear this "ancient and modern sorrow" should have a solid shoulder.