千年前推翻了秦王朝残暴统治的轰轰烈烈的陈胜、吴广起义,千年后在抗日战争、解放战争中浴血奋战的无数勇士可歌可泣的事迹,无不印证了江淮儿女不畏压迫、抵御欺凌的铮铮铁骨。
The heroic uprising of Chen Sheng and Wu Guang, who overthrew the brutal rule of the Qin Dynasty thousands of years ago, and the heroic deeds of countless brave men who fought hard in the Anti Japanese War and the liberation war thousands of years later, have all proved the unyielding character of the people of Jianghuai who are not afraid of oppression and resist bullying.
黄山松,我读懂了你!黄山松,你是徽魂!
Huangshan pine, I can read you! Huangshan pine, you are the soul of Hui!
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本文立意深远,作者以“黄山松”为象征物,通过对黄山松的描写,表达了对安徽文化、安徽人民的精神的讴歌、赞美之情。从黄山松入手,切入口小,但能小中见大,虚实相间,构筑黄山松与“徽魂”的相似点。文采飞扬是其另一大特点,整散句交错使用,“引用+排比”的修辞,抒情酣畅,气势充沛,扩充了文章的内涵,强化了对黄山松、对徽魂的赞美之情。
The author takes "Huangshan pine" as a symbol, and through the description of Huangshan pine, expresses the eulogy and praise of Anhui culture and the spirit of Anhui people. Starting from Huangshan pine, it has a small cut in, but it can see the big from the small, and alternates the real and the virtual, so as to build the similarities between Huangshan pine and "Hui soul". Another major feature of the poem is its elegant style. The use of whole and scattered sentences in a staggered way, the rhetoric of "quotation + parallelism", which is lyrical and full of momentum, expands the connotation of the article, and strengthens the praise of Huangshan pine and Huihun.
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