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车站一瞥

I looked up at him. He was of medium height. He was wearing a cheap arhat shirt. His eyes were a little muddy, but he seemed to be still in spirit. This made me suddenly think of Xiangzi. For the sake of life, although the government repeatedly stressed that it was not allowed to use motorcycles to carry passengers. If I caught him, I would be fined It's forbidden for many times. Yes, our society is still rich and poor. These people can't afford to rent taxis, so they have to rely on motorcycles to carry passengers. If they don't come to pick up the car, maybe the children in the family will starve Thinking of this, I nodded with a smile and took his helmet

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人物形象刻画逼真，有群体人物描写（摩的佬），也有个体人物描写（中年男子），点面结合；外貌、神情、语言刻画符合人物的身份。文中“我”的心理刻画尤其传神，凸现了一个怕上当受骗而又善良的小女生形象。全文条理清晰，写得很有层次，将车站所遇的一幕生动地展现在读者面前

The characters are vividly portrayed, including group characters (Mo's guy) and individual characters (middle-aged man), with a combination of point and face; the appearance, expression and language portrayal are in line with the characters' identity. The psychological depiction of "I" in this paper is particularly vivid, highlighting the image of a kind little girl who is afraid of being cheated. The full text is clear and well-organized, which vividly presents the scene of the station to the readers