Comments (Chen Jun, vice president and senior Chinese teacher of Experimental Middle School Affiliated to Central South University): the author of this paper has a good idea of composition conception and has written out his personality. The article does not directly narrate and express feelings for "the experience of running", but holds the elements of "speed" and "height" to carry out association and imagination, which has unexpected results and cares about the effect in reason. The author's language is very expressive, and the proper use of the whole sentence adds a lot of color to the language items. All in all, the atmosphere of this paper and the accuracy and fluency of language are the basic reasons why this paper stands out.
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