With moving, we can stick to the principle and persevere. Moving makes our hearts soft, moving makes us hold our faith more firmly. Su Wu shepherds in the vast sea, the desert sand, I believe it is his heart moved, that from the great love for the country moved him to the road of barren bravely. And Wang Zhaojun: "once you go to Zitai and lianshuo desert, you will only stay in the green tomb to dusk." Her bravery also comes from her real moving, following the inner moving, let's start with moving, moving will deeply plant faith and strength in the land, and become a green brilliance.

艰险与坎坷，我们不怕；风沙与风雪，我们依旧昂首向前。这是因为感动给我们的内心准备了最丰厚的食粮。带着感动出发，让人生的航向永远地朝向美好的远方。带着感动出发，让辛苦而漫长的生活因为感动而充盈着快乐与希望！

We are not afraid of difficulties and frustrations; we are still looking forward to sandstorms and snowstorms. This is because moving prepares the most abundant food for our hearts. With moving start, let the direction of life always towards a better distance. With moving, let the hard and long life be filled with happiness and hope because of moving!

【名师点评】

[comments on famous teachers]

考生将“带着感动出发”放在生命的层面思考，放在人生的高度思考。生命，因为蕴藏感动，更会彰显它的绚烂、尊贵和坚强；人生，因为伴随感动，更会找到方向，阔步向前，充盈着快乐与希望。从这个方面看，考生的理性思维缜密而深刻。文章的选材凸显出两个特点：选材的教材化，譬如陶渊明的“性本爱丘山”、司马迁的“史家之绝唱”、史铁生的“生命达观”、苏武的“牧羊于泽”和王昭君的“独留青冢向黄昏”，既丰富，又深邃；素材的排比式呈现，规避了展开铺叙的俗套，既增加了内容的容量，又强化了求证的力度。(刘德海)

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