点评:这是一篇清新的叙事散文。由女孩成长的三个阶段,对应、紧扣试题材料中的三种“滋味”,比较自然、贴切,并能随着年龄的增长,生动地表现“童年”———“少女”———“大姑娘”心态、爱好的发展变化。
Comments: This is a fresh narrative prose. The three stages of girl's growth, corresponding to and closely related to the three "tastes" in the test materials, are more natural and appropriate, and can vividly show the development and changes of "childhood" -- "young girl" -- "big girl" mentality and hobbies with the growth of age.
本文的最大特色是:语言活泼,情感率真,笔调轻松,没有雕饰、做作的痕迹,没有故做崇高、提升主题之态,形式与内容和谐一致,一位天真活泼、单纯可爱的女孩跃然纸上。
The main features of this paper are: lively language, Frank emotion, relaxed style, no trace of carving and affectation, no reason to be sublime and enhance the theme, harmonious form and content, a naive, lively, simple and lovely girl jumped onto the paper.
【女孩的成长滋味多】相关文章:
★ 高三英语作文 No Pains,No Gains不劳不获
★ 高三英语作文 Be grateful for friends感激朋友
★ 高一英语作文:The Different Treatment
★ 高二英语的作文:A Travel To Hong Kong