Pathetic disaster has existed since ancient times. However, from ancient times to the present, who has ever seen such a shocking and cohesive unity? In historical records, it is said that if the people are united, the family will be safe; if the people are united, the country will be prosperous. Today, it's people and people, people and country, country and the world. Why worry about the uneasiness of home and country?

青山一道，我们同历风雨共团聚；而将五洲四海的人心联结在一起的纽带，是这样一种期望：为天下立心，为生民立命，为往圣继绝学，为万世享太平！

Together with Qingshan mountain, we have been reunited with the past. The bond that connects the hearts of people from all over the world is the expectation: to build a heart for the world, to build a life for the people, to inherit the unique learning for the saints, and to enjoy peace for all the world!

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[comments on famous teachers]

此文在亮出“国殇是一场悲剧，然而，国殇更是一次空前的团聚”这一观点后，精选典型事例，通过“一个灾民与她的救命恩人们最质朴也最真诚的团聚”等三个层次，逐层深入地展开论证，最后归结出“在今天，则是人民与人民、人民与国家、国家与世界的携手，又何愁家不安、国不兴”。全文见解新颖，内容集中，思路清晰，材料丰富。?文章语言流畅，巧妙融合现代歌词、古代诗文、现实场景于一炉，“青山无法阻隔我们风雨同舟的携手，地域也不会隐没团结一心的民族头上那轮共有的明月”“五千米是我们能否拉住受灾人民的手的距离，是生与死的距离”“拨不开汶川上空连天蔽日的迷雾，但他们必须拨开震区人民心上的乌云”等文句既饱含深情又文采飞扬，体现出作者深厚的写作功底。

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