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缤纷成就和谐

―――问苍茫大地，谁主沉浮？

Who is the master of ups and downs?

―――缤纷的色彩，

-- colorful colors,

―――为何？

Why?

―――缤纷成就和谐！

-- colorful achievements in harmony!

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就这道作文试题，不少考生只满足于演绎试题材料中的某种“滋味”，未能对材料进行深一步的开掘、拓展，立意显得一般化，缺乏深刻，缺少思辨。本文的不同凡响之处，就在于体“味”且辨“味”，在不同之中看到相同之处，“和而不同方为和谐”的观点掷地有声。

On this composition test, many examinees are only satisfied with deducing a certain "taste" in the test materials. They fail to dig and expand the materials further. Their ideas are general, lack of depth and lack of speculation. The difference of this paper lies in the body "taste" and distinguish "taste". We can see the same in the differences, and the view that "harmony is harmony if we are different" is very strong.

在作文中勇于表达自己的思想，见他人之所未见，言他人之所未言，积极思考，善于思辨，是该文脱颖而出的秘诀。

It is the secret to stand out in the composition that you are brave to express your thoughts, see what others have not seen, say what others have not said, think actively and be good at thinking.