The author keenly found the broad thinking space shown in the subject materials, and quickly determined the starting point of his intention - "good intentions do bad things". However, the brilliance and profundity of the article lies in not simply explaining and illustrating the general expression of "good intentions do bad things", but in choosing examples from three different aspects of political life and social life. The so-called "good intentions" are deeply analyzed, penetrating and thought-provoking. The criticism of Falungong and Lhasa's "3.14" event is particularly profound, which shows a high degree of political responsibility and ideological level of middle school students.

全文结构严谨，首尾照应，层次清晰。语言流畅，文句有表现力，词语的运用准确到位，连“暴虎冯河”这样不大常用的成语也用得十分妥帖，其表达能力和语言水平值得称道。

The structure of the paper is rigorous, with clear layers. The language is fluent, the sentences are expressive, and the words are used accurately and in place. Even the idioms such as "fierce tiger and Fenghe" are not commonly used. Their expressive ability and language level are praiseworthy.

（三）老鹰哲学

（3） Eagle Philosophy

南太平洋上的小龟纵然聪明，不过，最终还是葬身鹰腹!自然界中鹰享有盛誉，仔细总结，发现其有以下三个特点，称之为老鹰哲学。

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