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且放云帆济沧海

The composition of the examination room should learn to "turn the question into an image". The so-called "turning a topic into an image" refers to being good at using "pictographic imagination" to turn an abstract into a concrete image, expressing one's mind with a concrete and vivid image, and avoiding the topic of conceptualization and illustration. The author of this composition is well versed in this way. He compares the growing children to "a boat sailing". The full text of the elaboration closely clasps the image of "a leaf of cloud sail", and emphasizes that the boat "will become strong in the trials of wind and rain", which greatly enhances the readability of the article and makes it more attractive and persuasive.

此外，文章中心明确，语言表达富有意蕴，像“请解除目光的锁链，让孩子乘着自己的人生之舟与风浪一搏吧”“这样，他们才会成为带着成熟微笑的舵手，从胜利的彼岸带回满意的答卷”等，读来耐人回味。标题“且放云帆济沧海”化用唐诗名句，也有新意，且与文章内容相得益彰。

In addition, the center of the article is clear, and the language expression is full of meaning, such as "please remove the chain of vision, let the children take their own life boat to fight with the wind and waves", "in this way, they will become the helmsman with a mature smile, bringing back satisfactory answers from the other side of the victory", etc., which will bear people's aftertaste. The title "let the clouds sail for the sea" is a famous sentence of Tang poetry, which also has new ideas and complements the content of the article.