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绕树三匝何枝可依

拥有自知与拼搏，光明就在你的眼前，在努力过后，你会发现——“绕树三匝，此枝可依！”

With self-knowledge and hard work, the light is in front of you. After hard work, you will find: "three turns around the tree, this branch can be relied on!"

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作者引用曹孟德的诗句作为标题并贯串全文，贴切自然，古朴典雅，是构思上的一大亮点；阐发观点时，事理结合，旁征博引，孔子、卓别林、比尔?盖茨等实例涉及古今中外，具有很强的说服力。此外，语言表达简洁晓畅，富有张力，也是此文胜人一筹之处。

The author quotes Cao mengde's verse as the title and runs through the whole text, which is natural and simple and elegant. It is a bright spot in the design. When expounding the point of view, the combination of theory and reasoning, and extensive references, Confucius, Chaplin, Bill Gates and other examples involve ancient and modern China and foreign countries, which is very persuasive. In addition, the language expression is concise, clear and full of tension, which is also one of the advantages of Wensheng.