世上无难事，只要肯登攀_高中英语作文

世上无难事，只要肯登攀

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这是一篇用议论散文写作的考场佳作。作者从共和国元帅叶剑英的诗中摘出两句，打造美文，演绎话题。一句摘引，一石数鸟，既用作标题，又用作题记。不但彰显了主旨，总领了全文，而且贯穿始终，前后呼应，使文脉流畅，结构严谨，文章语言优美流畅，多种修辞手法的运用和富于哲理的语句的锻造，更是使文章熠熠生辉。

This is an excellent essay written in argumentative prose. The author selects two sentences from the poems of Ye Jianying, the marshal of the Republic of China, to create beautiful articles and deduce topics. An excerpt, a stone count birds, both as a title, as a title. It not only highlights the main idea and leads the whole paper, but also runs through the whole process and echoes back and forth, making the context smooth, the structure rigorous, the language beautiful and fluent, the use of various rhetorical devices and the forging of philosophical sentences, which makes the article shining.