在追求中认清自我价值_高中英语作文

在追求中认清自我价值

人生的漫漫征程需要我们用奋斗去闯荡，在人生的追求当中，清醒地认识自我的价值，才能在人生旅途创造生命的辉煌！

The long journey of life requires us to make a living with struggle. In the pursuit of life, we should have a clear understanding of our own value, so as to create a brilliant life in the journey of life!

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这位考生对所给寓言的寓意把握准确，所拟题目“在追求中认清自我价值”，正是全文的中心论点。文章由自然界的胡杨及“人生亦如此”提出观点后，采用的是层进式结构，以屈原、李白、陶渊明、苏轼等人为实例，事理结合，层层深入地阐明了论点，例证丰富，说理透彻，令人信服。另外，诗句的引用，比喻等修辞手法的运用，使文句优美流畅。

This examinee has a good command of the allegory, and the topic "recognizing self value in pursuit" is the central point of the thesis. After the natural Populus euphratica and "life is the same", this paper adopts the hierarchical structure, taking Qu Yuan, Li Bai, Tao Yuanming, Su Shi and others as examples, combining the facts and reasoning, and elaborating the arguments layer by layer, with rich examples, thorough reasoning and convincing. In addition, the use of rhetorical devices, such as quotation and metaphor, makes the sentences beautiful and fluent.