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文章由“月泻树丛中”这一极其普通的意象切入话题，可谓角度巧妙；并由此引发联想，生发感悟，可谓机智机灵。

This article starts from the very common image of "the moon in the trees", which can be said to be ingenious in terms of angle, and thus leads to association, feelings and wisdom.

文章开篇扣题。作者由“月泻树丛”想到归有光，想到其《项脊轩志》，想到有关空白的种种物象，想到人生留点空白的别致情调，并进一步联想到《红楼梦》的意蕴、沈从文先生的《边城》和余秋雨先生的《垂钓者》的意趣，感叹“文学中的留一点空白，发人深思”；再联想到艾菲尔铁塔“在空白处亮出巴黎的建筑风光”，感叹“建筑上的空白独辟蹊径，让美景一览无遗”；并进一步联想到生活中、艺术里留一点空白的现象也是随处可见可闻可感。最后，作者深深感叹，热情呼告，让我们“留一点空白，去回味人生中的快乐哀伤；留一点空白，去描绘未来的蓝图；留一点空白，让消磨在马蹄轮铁，无谓敷衍中的光阴回溯到原始情愫中来，让生命在空白处闪亮起来。”有力收束。

At the beginning of the article. The author thinks of GUI Youguang, Xiang Jixuan's annals, all kinds of images about the blank, the unique feeling of leaving a little blank in life, the meaning of a dream of Red Mansions, the border city by Shen Congwen and the angler by Yu Qiuyu, and laments that "there is a little blank in literature, which makes people think deeply"; then he thinks of the significance of "dream of Red Mansions" Eiffel Tower "highlights the architectural scenery of Paris in the blank", exclaims that "the blank in architecture is unique, which makes the beautiful scenery fully visible"; and further associates with the phenomenon of leaving a little blank in life and art, which can also be seen and felt everywhere. At last, the author deeply laments and enthusiastically proclaims that let's "leave a little blank to recall the joys and sorrows of life; leave a little blank to describe the blueprint of the future; leave a little blank to let the time spent in horseshoe and wheel iron, needlessly perfunctory, go back to the original feelings, and let life shine in the blank." A powerful ending.

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