因为这是我们自己的歌啊,我们自己的诗。
Because this is our own song, our own poem.
叶芝说,我将不停地走啊,不停地歌唱。
Yeats said, "I will walk and sing.".
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文章从游历中对“雨”“路”“山”“水”“风”的感受入手,巧妙地点出人应“永远诗意地歌唱,诗意地生活”的题意。构思比较巧妙,符合题意。写景非常细腻、形象,语言流畅、优美,结构严谨,读来给人美的享受。
The article starts with the feeling of "rain", "road", "mountain", "water" and "wind" in the travel, and ingeniously points out the inscription that people should "always sing poetically and live poetically". The design is more ingenious and in line with the topic. The scenery is very delicate, vivid, fluent and beautiful in language, rigorous in structure, which gives people beautiful enjoyment.
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