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那鱼那鹰那人

终点

End

我终究还是回来了，回到这个有着无数的气息的地方。一切都没有改变，我决定复读，我也不是不跑了，只是希望有一个更高的起跑点。

After all, I came back to this place with countless breath. Everything hasn't changed. I decided to read again. I didn't stop running, just hope to have a higher starting point.

后记：鱼终究是离不开给予它生命之源的水。

Postscript: fish is inseparable from the water that gives it the source of life.

鹰，终究离不开给予它希望之源的天空。

The eagle, after all, cannot leave the sky that gives it the source of hope.

我，始终逃离不了父母和亲人朋友们的爱心交织成的幸福圈……

I can't escape from the happy circle of love between my parents, relatives and friends

点评(中南大学附属实验中学副校长、语文高级教师陈军)：这篇作文拟了个有意蕴吸引人的标题，有“文好题一半”的效果。从立意上看，紧紧扣住“跑的体验”讲自己的感受，谈自己的情感体验，容易引起共鸣。从结构上看，题记画龙点睛，小标题为本文增色不少。关注生活，关注人生是本文写作成功的关键要素。

Comments (Chen Jun, vice president and senior Chinese teacher of Experimental Middle School Affiliated to Central South University): this composition has drawn up a meaningful and attractive title, which has the effect of "half of the questions are good at writing". From the point of view, it's easy to resonate when we talk about our own feelings and emotional experience by closely clasping the "running experience". From the structural point of view, the title makes the finishing point and the subtitle adds a lot of color to this article. Paying attention to life and life is the key to the success of this paper.