"One step and one life", the title is concise and simple, which is quite figurative and symbolic. There are many famous sayings about "one step and one life". Like "a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step", "one wrong step, one wrong step", "one wrong step becomes eternal hatred", "one careless move, one lose everything", "no small flow, no sea; no small step, no even a thousand miles" All these proverbs reveal a truth: to do a good job, to take a good step, is essential to one's life. Sometimes, to do a good job and take a good step can achieve a person's life; to do a wrong thing and take a wrong step can destroy a person's life. At all times and in all over the world, there are countless people and things related to "one step and one life".
四、合理选材,务必出彩。审准题目以后,就要选择题材,运思行文了。选材时,可以选自己,也可以选他人;可以选古人,也可以选今人;可以选国人,也可以选外族。只要与“一步与一生”有关的人和事即可。因此,我们可以将题材锁定在亲人、友人,乃至古人、今人上,从正面立意,写古今中外的风云人物、黎民百姓因“一步”而影响“一生”的情结,表达自己的景仰敬意、歌颂赞美;也可以从反面着笔,写历史现实中的败类小丑因“一步”而铸就“一生”的遗憾,乃至遗臭万年的罪恶,表达自己的憎恶仇恨或鞭挞愤怒。因此,要写好这道作文题,选材的关键在于选取恰当的角度,一定要阐释清楚“一步”与“一生”的辩证关系。而出彩的关键则在于表达方式的运用和突出主题的技巧。可以或单向思维,或双向思维,或多向思维,或深入一步,别具匠心,写出与众不同的华章。
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