A gust of autumn wind blows, maple leaves are all over the ground, everyone rushes up, hoping to find the reddest and most beautiful maple leaf. However, the real valuable Maple will not be easily blown down by the breeze. It stands high on the top of the tree, as bright as fire. So, everyone scrambled up. One inattention, was next to the students squeezed down, fell heavily on the ground, worn out the hand, broke the leg, pain in the heart. But I dare not rest for a moment, even if I am a step late, the maple leaves will be picked. I climbed up in pain, tears, had to quietly flow into my stomach.
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“高考”这道家常菜,说来平常,却风味十足。酸甜苦辣样样俱全。虽然,我确实不肯多尝一次,然而它的味道已经刻骨铭心了。
"College entrance examination" is a common dish, but it's full of flavor. Everything is sweet, sour, bitter and hot. Although I do not want to taste it once more, the taste of it is unforgettable.
当多年后的某一天,高考的味道再次回味在嘴里时,更会百感交集,意味深远。
When one day, many years later, the taste of college entrance examination is in the mouth again, it will be more mixed and far-reaching.
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本文值得借鉴的地方还是有不少:如标题就显得很有品味,正文以三个片断,从不同的角度诠释了自己对“高考”的理解和感悟。但存在的问题还是不少:第一片断读完后,我们竟然不知道考生究竟要写什么,要表达什么主旨;第二片断谈自己的命运自己掌握,可是所列举的与之并没有多大关联,而且还有几个错别字出现,让本文大打折扣。最后被判为三类文,不能不令人感到遗憾。
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