一、从家庭、学校和社会的角度看:人生旅程中遇到坎儿“摔了一跤”是常有的事,作为家长、学校、社会没有必要放不下心、放不开手,而应鼓励孩子跨过这道坎、坚强地站起来。需要提醒的是,如果将“家庭”“学校”“社会”不分主次地一一写来,容易导致笔墨分散;如果只从一个方面切入,可能更利于写具体、说透彻。
1、 From the point of view of family, school and society, it is a common thing to encounter Kaner's "fall" in the journey of life. As a parent, school and society, it is not necessary to let go of his / her heart and hands, but to encourage his / her children to step over this barrier and stand up firmly. It should be reminded that if you write "family", "school" and "society" one by one, regardless of the primary and secondary, it is easy to lead to ink dispersion; if you only cut in from one aspect, it may be more conducive to write specifically and thoroughly.
二、从孩子的角度看:(1)在成长过程中“摔跤”是很正常的,不必手足无措,不必苦苦等待谁来搀扶,而应主动地站起来。只有这样,才能锻炼顽强的意志品质,才能适应当今社会的激烈竞争,才能增强未来克服更大困难的勇气。(2)“摔跤”后不能怨天怨地,责怪“西瓜皮”害人或“道路”不平,而应多找自身原因;从“摔跤”中汲取教训,才能在人生之路上一路走好,顺利抵达目的地。
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