As for my society, I'm sorry, I don't know it. I only know that I am pushed forward by a huge force along a narrow alley. What's ahead, glory and dream? A trap or abyss? I can't see, I have no choice
参加中考的学弟学妹们,突然被告知要考体育了。他们的家长,开始临时抱佛脚地陪练跳绳、跑步。这不过是应试教育体制下又一个新式却并不新鲜的失败案例罢了。而我今天走进高考考场,眼前这幅画,再次让我陷入深重的悲哀。更其悲哀的是,出题者的苦心跃然纸上,却仍然无法抑制悲哀继续一年又一年地流淌。
All of a sudden, the younger and younger students who took the middle school entrance examination were told that they were going to take the physical education test. Their parents began to do rope skipping and running temporarily. This is just another new but not new failure case under the exam oriented education system. Today, I walked into the college entrance examination room, and the picture in front of me once again plunged me into deep sorrow. What's more sad is that the author's painstaking heart leaps to the surface of the paper, but still can't restrain the flow of sorrow year after year.
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这篇考场作文,尽管它的内容、它的行文都带一点另类色彩,带一点调侃味儿(比如“六年来母亲天天亲手煮羹汤把我这只丑小鸭填肥(却一点也不壮)”“我的中学,很是响当当的,赢得许多块金光闪闪的光荣牌挂在门口”等),但它扣题紧密而感慨深沉,点击时弊能入木三分,可称得上是不乏锋芒的、比较精彩的杂文。
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