症状四语序句序混乱
Disorder of four word order of symptoms
【表现】 作文的语序、句序混乱,通常这里写一点,跳过去又另起一点,这样造成要么文章洋洋洒洒一大篇却全是废话,没有中心和重点,什么都没有表达清楚;要么通篇没有适当的过渡词、句,整篇文章一“逗”到底,密密麻麻让人找不着北。
[performance] the word order and sentence order of a composition are disordered. Usually, one point is written here, and another point is skipped. As a result, either the article is full of nonsense, without center and focus, and nothing is expressed clearly; or the whole article is full of inappropriate transitional words and sentences, and the whole article "teases" to the end, which makes people unable to find the north.
【症结】 平时练习时不注意表达的连贯性,想到哪里就写到哪里,写作之前没有列提纲的习惯,不去深入思索怎样表达才能达到最好的效果,从而造成整篇文章逻辑思维混乱,层次不清晰。
[crux] in normal practice, we don't pay attention to the consistency of expression, write where we want to, and don't have the habit of outlining before writing, and don't think deeply about how to express to achieve the best effect, thus causing the logical thinking confusion and unclear level of the whole article.
【突破之道】 整理成篇 行文连贯
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